Monday, February 4, 2013

JCCS Academic Language Assessment Week 21

Should performance enhancing drugs, such as steroids, be allowed in sports? No! drugs such as steroids shouldn't be allowed in sports. One really important aspect that athletics don't realize when taking steroid is that its really bad for their health. Steroids don't just give the athletic strength and energy. Steroids also give athletics side effects for PERIOD of time while their taking the drug. For example, males that take steroid they start to get man boobs, their balls also start to shrink and the PRIMARY thing is that males can reproduce sperm no longer. For woman who use steroids start to develop a more masculine physique with fewer curves and will even experience shrinkage of the breast tissue. Also the who concept of a sport is to show your ability of how you play the sport and mostly in sport completions. If you're taking steroids because you don't have that much energy or strength to play the sport the athletics is like cheating, and athletics aren't not showing a good example for young children. The best thing for athletics to start doing is to go with the TRADITION to play the sport with no drugs. To start showing a good example for young children and to stop using drugs such as steroids , because it bad for athletics health.

1 comment:

  1. You really put a lot of effort into composing a paragraph that really demonstrates your understanding of this topic! Since you elaborated on each idea, your paragraph is very persuasive. Also, you correctly incorporated the vocabulary words. Good job!

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